The student lists several textual features and authorial choices from the works of Keats, including caesura, plosive consonant sounds, personification, and metaphor, demonstrating an understanding of literary techniques related to femininity. However, the analysis of these features lacks depth, as the student fails to convincingly explain the significance of specific terms, such as "Forlorn!" and how they contribute to the emotional shifts in the poetry. Additionally, the connection between the analysis and the thesis statement regarding unattainable femininity is not sufficiently established, particularly in relation to the Nightingale's portrayal. While the interpretation of femininity is linked to themes of fear and longing, the evaluation of how effectively the textual features convey these ideas is inadequate, particularly concerning the impact of structural choices like caesura.
