The student effectively connects the global issue of emotional suffering in warfare to Wilfred Owen's poem "Mental Cases" and Ben Quilty's painting "Trooper M After Afghanistan no. 2." The analysis includes well-supported ideas, demonstrating an understanding of the literal meanings and relevant details from both works. However, the student fails to provide specific textual evidence for some claims, particularly regarding Owen's "Disabled," which weakens the argument. Additionally, the analysis could benefit from deeper interpretations of the visual elements in Quilty's work and clearer conclusions linking the global issue to the authors' choices. Overall, while the student makes persuasive connections and references to the extracts, further refinement is needed in certain areas to strengthen the overall analysis.
