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Persepolis and Loaded: The selling of dreams to the vulnerable by institutions for their personal gain.

English A (Lang & Lit) IO - SL

May 2024
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Criterion A [10/10]:

The student effectively connects both the literary extract, 'Persepolis' by Marjane Satrapi, and the non-literary body of work, 'Loaded' by Aaron Tinney, to the global issue of institutions selling dreams to the vulnerable for personal gain. They support their discussion of the global issue with detailed analysis from both extracts/works, selecting specific references to effectively support their ideas. The student demonstrates a correct understanding of the literal meaning of the two extracts/works and an excellent and insightful understanding of the message behind them, delving into deeper implications and themes. Additionally, they recall relevant details from both works, analyze and interpret the extracts/works in relation to the global issue, and draw persuasive, correct, and in-depth conclusions about how the global issue is presented and utilized in the two extracts/works.

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Criterion B [8/10]:

The student's oral assessment effectively provides brief descriptions of the nature and message of the literary and non-literary works, demonstrating a strong emphasis on analysis and interpretation of features and authorial choices from the extracts. The analysis offered is insightful and directly relevant to the topic of institutions selling dreams to the vulnerable for personal gain, showcasing a clear understanding of the works' relevance. Additionally, the student correctly interprets and analyzes the features and authorial choices with direct respect to the global issue, quoting directly from the works to support their analysis. However, the student should have explicitly pointed out the effectiveness of the authorial choices in evoking a specific reaction in the reader and devoted slightly more attention to analyzing the form of "Persepolis".

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Criterion C [0/0]:

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