The student has provided a predominantly analytical oral presentation, focusing on the interpretation and analysis of authorial choices in the selected works of Carol Ann Duffy and Lauren Greenfield. The analysis is insightful and directly relevant to the topic, effectively exploring the characterization of women through their possessions and status. The student successfully identified and quoted several features from the extracts, demonstrating a clear understanding of how these elements relate to the global issue. Additionally, the content and form of both works are thoroughly analyzed, showcasing the significance of imagery, dramatic monologue, and visual techniques in conveying the themes of identity and materialism. However, some subcriteria could not be assessed due to the absence of a full internal oral transcript.
