The student's oral presentation provides a balanced exploration of the photographs by Mass Niessen and the work Persepolis, offering enough description and analysis for the listener to understand the works and their deeper meanings. The analysis is predominately analytical, focusing on specific features and authorial choices in both works. However, the student could enhance the insightful analysis by delving deeper into certain techniques and evaluating the effectiveness of the features in conveying the global issue and evoking reactions in the viewer. Additionally, the student is advised to analyze the form of Persepolis more thoroughly, including its graphic and text elements, to provide a more comprehensive understanding of the work.