The student listed several textual features and authorial choices from Michelle Obama's speeches, including personal anecdotes, emotive language, parallelism, and historical allusion, effectively contributing to the analysis. The textual features are analyzed convincingly, illustrating how they inspire agency and community responsibility, directly linking the analysis to the chosen topic of transformative narratives and the thesis statement about inspiring change. Additionally, the student interpreted these choices appropriately, showing their effectiveness in conveying the themes of empowerment and societal transformation. Overall, the evaluation highlights how these authorial techniques foster connections between individual experiences and broader societal narratives, reinforcing the essay's central arguments.
