The student presents a focused and detailed description of the research question, including the correct question tag, independent and dependent variables, and the method, although it should end with a question mark. The background information provided is too specific and chemical-focused, lacking a more general overview of the main issue studied. However, the chemistry is explained well enough for the reader to fully understand it without the need for rereading. The methodology is highly appropriate to the topic, focused on answering the research question, and includes appropriate steps to assure the relevancy and validity of the obtained results. Additionally, the student shows full awareness of safety hazards, ethical concerns, and environmental issues that can arise during the experiment.
