The student provided a detailed description of the main topic, although a proper title was missing. The research question was not written with correct grammar, and the student could have rephrased it to improve clarity. The background information provided was relevant and focused, demonstrating an understanding of the chemical concepts related to the investigation. The chemistry was explained comprehensively, enabling the reader to understand the concepts involved. While the methodology was focused on addressing the research question, it lacked the necessary precision to obtain reliable data. Additionally, the student did not show consideration for ethical concerns, even if they didn't find any. However, the student demonstrated full awareness of safety hazards and environmental issues, providing detailed risk mitigations and measures to minimize environmental impact.
