The student provides a focused and detailed description of the aim of the experiment, which is to investigate the changes in hydrogen gas production and the rate of reaction in the reaction of magnesium and hydrochloric acid in various temperatures. However, the research question lacks detail, and the background information provided is very scarce, unspecific, and not supported by references to the sources of information. The student explains the chemistry well enough for the reader to understand it without the need for rereading and provides an appropriate methodology to answer the research question while assuring the relevancy and validity of the obtained results. The student also shows full awareness of safety hazards but fails to address ethical and environmental concerns.
