The student has provided a focused and detailed description of the main topic, clearly explaining the study on the effect of changing the position of the hydroxyl group on the carbon chain of an alcohol and its impact on specific bond enthalpies. The background information is relevant and focused, providing a detailed explanation of key concepts necessary for understanding the investigation. The chemistry is well explained, and the methodology of the investigation is highly appropriate to the topic, utilizing data obtained from chemical databases to test the relationship between the position of the hydroxyl group and the bond dissociation energy. However, the methodology could be improved by focusing on answering the research question and including appropriate steps to assure the relevancy and validity of the obtained results. Additionally, the student should show full awareness of safety hazards, ethical concerns, and environmental issues that can arise during the experiment.
