The student provides a focused and detailed description of the main topic, which is to investigate the influence of time and temperature on the pH of the product of saponification of canola oil. The background information is well-organized and relevant, conveying an appropriate amount of information necessary to understand the experiment. The chemistry of the reaction is explained well enough for the reader to fully understand it. The methodology is highly appropriate for the topic and focused on answering the research question, while also including appropriate steps to assure the relevancy and validity of the obtained results. The student shows full awareness of safety hazards and environmental issues that can arise during the experiment, but there is no mention of ethical concerns.
