IB Business and Management IA example: To what extent has the implementation of sustainable policies affected the Bertoli 55 winery’s profitability?

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Business and Management-HL

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May 2024

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Criterion A

3/5

The student has successfully identified sustainability as the key concept in their Internal Assessment, as evidenced by its inclusion on the title page and the focus of the research question on the impact of sustainable policies at Bertoli 55. The research question effectively addresses both historical and future perspectives, considering past implementations and anticipated effects on profitability. The work is centered around the single business of Bertoli 55, providing relevant background information and analyzing how sustainability practices influence financial performance and brand reputation. However, the student did not clearly outline the issue at hand or explain the methodology utilized in the investigation, which limits the overall clarity of the IA. Despite these shortcomings, the connection between sustainability and the organization is well described and analyzed throughout the assessment.

Criterion B

1/4

The student included three supporting documents in the IA, which consist of balance sheets, an interview with the CEO, and relevant research papers, effectively providing a foundation for analysis. Each document is clearly labeled, enhancing clarity and organization. However, the student did not provide a bibliography or a list of the supporting documents, making it impossible to assess their contemporary relevance and validity. Additionally, while the documents are relevant and in-depth, the student failed to highlight key parts or assess the validity and reliability of these documents. Overall, while the supporting documents contribute a range of ideas and views regarding sustainability, improvements are needed in documentation and analysis.