The student has successfully identified the key concept of ethics in their work, which is clearly indicated on the title page. The research question focuses on a past issue related to the company, Roblox, and the work is centered around a single business, meeting the requirements. Additionally, the student has selected a real business issue relevant to the syllabus and provided background information about Roblox. Furthermore, they have outlined the issue clearly. However, there are areas for improvement, as the methodology used to investigate the issue is not clearly explained, and the connection between the key concept of ethics and the organization under study is not consistently analyzed throughout the entire Internal Assessment.
