The student provides a focused and detailed description of the research question, clearly outlining how different concentrations of raw honey affect the growth of Escherichia coli. Background information is relevant and focused, detailing the increase of diabetes in Singapore and the antibacterial properties of honey. However, the student fails to meet several subcriteria, including a clear title for the study and a comprehensive explanation of the biology involved, particularly regarding the antibacterial properties of honey. Additionally, there is a lack of awareness of safety hazards, ethical concerns, and environmental issues related to the experiment, which should have been addressed to enhance the overall quality of the investigation.
