The student provides a focused and detailed description of the main topic, including the title and introductory paragraphs. However, there is a lack of a focused and detailed description of the research question, and relevant background information about the organism studied is missing. The student effectively explains the biology concepts and includes a methodology appropriate for answering the research question. Additionally, the methodology includes steps to ensure the relevancy and validity of the results. However, the student fails to state and explain a null and an alternative hypothesis as well as show awareness of environmental issues that can arise during the experiment. These are important aspects that need to be included in a comprehensive internal assessment.