The student demonstrates a strong understanding of the importance of outlining the topic of their study at the beginning of the essay, making its aim clear to the reader. They establish a clear context of the study, describe the relevant background information, purpose, and focus of the essay, and present a detailed and focused research question. The research question is directly relevant to Psychology and does not include topics, terms, or concepts from other subjects. Additionally, the essay includes a clear description of the approach to the topic, incorporating relevant psychological theories and studies, with a focus maintained throughout the entire length of the essay. The resources used are predominantly from accredited psychological journals and books, and the essay is mainly based on secondary sources, providing a balanced investigation.