The student effectively incorporates relevant and appropriate source material in their essay, directly linking it to the posed research question. They also ensure that the majority of the source material is from accredited scientific sources and provide clear explanations of technical or subject-specific terms, demonstrating their knowledge. However, there are limited descriptions of the methodology present throughout the studies, and the evaluation of the obtained evidence from empirical studies based on culture, ethics, gender, and employed methodology is also lacking. The essay maintains an academic and analytical tone without being informal and does not oversaturate with technical terms.
