The student clearly presented a focused research question and established the geographical context of Vancouver, supported by relevant concepts such as food deserts, food swamps, food oases, and Social Disorganization Theory. The student provided a coherent, reproducible methodology using mapped food-access data and VPD crime data across 24 neighborhoods, and the investigation offered a comparison of these factors. However, the research question was not stated on the title page, and the student did not justify the sample size across food-access categories. The student also needed to reflect more fully on the reliability of the data, including limitations arising from using only three fast-food chains.