The student discusses the existing literature on the selected topic, referencing scholars such as Daniel, Bruccoli, and Churchwell, which demonstrates their engagement with critical perspectives that support their analysis of Fitzgerald's critique of the American Dream. Their understanding of literary concepts is evident through the correct use of terminology and analysis of narrative techniques, symbolism, and diction throughout the essay. The student effectively applies various concepts and explores the topic by incorporating relevant research materials, including secondary sources that enhance their arguments. Additionally, the subject matter of the essay remains fully relevant to the posed research question, and a range of scholarly sources is referenced to support their analysis. However, there is a need to improve the quality of some referenced materials by replacing non-academic sources with more reputable, peer-reviewed academic sources.