The student chose an appropriate topic for their Extended Essay, focusing on Andre Aciman's "Call Me By Your Name" and its exploration of the human experience of fear of rejection through stylistic devices. The research question was clearly articulated, presented as a question, and effectively guided the reader's understanding of the essay's focus. The student demonstrated an understanding of the text and its themes, justifying the choice of research question and explaining its relevance to existing psychological theories. While the essay included a critical engagement with secondary sources to support arguments, it lacked a clear discussion on how the analysis would be conducted. Overall, the student incorporated relevant sources, enhancing the depth of their exploration.