The student chose an appropriate topic related to identity in Lisa Ko's novel "The Leavers", which aligned with the themes of immigration and cultural complexity. The research question, while stated as a clear question, lacked specificity regarding the text type and focus, indicating room for improvement. However, the introduction effectively presented the research question, outlined the purpose, and connected it to existing knowledge, demonstrating a thoughtful approach to the analysis. The student incorporated critical theories and secondary sources effectively to support their arguments, enhancing the depth of their exploration of Deming Guo's identity journey.