The essay analysed the theme of religion in the lyrics of songs from Kanye West's album Yeezus, focusing on stylistic features. The research question was formulated as a question with an appropriate question tag and a question mark at the end, and was presented in the introduction. The purpose behind the research question was outlined, reflecting the student’s knowledge and understanding of the selected text. However, the essay could have included a clearer explanation of what its analysis would offer, and specified the stylistic features explored. Nevertheless, the student incorporated source material in a critical manner and referenced a sufficient number and range of sources to support their argument and develop a conclusion relevant to the research question. The essay also appropriately referenced both primary and secondary sources within the body of the essay.
