The student has chosen an appropriate topic for their essay, analyzing Carol Ann Duffy's anthology "The World's Wife" and its exploration of feminist themes, which aligns well with the subject of English language and literature. The source material incorporated is relevant and supports the research question, particularly through the use of Laura Mulvey's theory. However, the essay lacks clarity in communication, with ambiguous meanings and improper use of terminology, such as misidentifying examples of anaphora. Additionally, the context provided is insufficient, and the extended biography included is not relevant to the analysis. Overall, while the student demonstrates some understanding of the topic, there are significant areas that need improvement for clearer expression and contextual relevance.
