The selected topic exploring the motif of dreams in George Orwell's 1984 and Fyodor Dostoevsky's Crime and Punishment aligned well with the subject of the essay. The incorporation of source material was appropriate and relevant, effectively supporting the research question. Additionally, the student's references demonstrated an understanding of broader issues within the primary texts, linking themes of rebellion, guilt, and the struggle against oppressive systems. However, there were some issues with language clarity and the accurate use of subject-specific terminology. Furthermore, the essay lacked sufficient contextual information about the texts in the introduction.
