The student has outlined the topic clearly at the beginning of the work, providing a precise research question and a clear context for the research. The essay maintains a strong chemical emphasis and stays focused on the chemistry aspect of the investigation. The research question is answerable within the limitations of resources, time, and word limit, and is strictly within the academic scope of Chemistry. The student includes information about general chemistry background which enhances the understanding of the research, and undertook work in the laboratory. However, the methodology section lacks information for the procedure to be repeated by the reader, and the raw data should be presented in the main body of the work rather than in the appendix.
