The student has effectively outlined the topic of their study at the beginning of the essay, making it clear to the reader that the focus is on Nike's sustainability. The topic of the essay is specific and focused, centered on Nike, its sustainability, and the effect on profitability. The research question is detailed and focused on the importance of analyzing Nike's investment in sustainability and its impact on profitability, which is directly relevant to Business and Management. The work is mainly based on secondary sources and consists of high-level academic writing skills, as demonstrated by the extensive bibliography and appropriate use of terminology. However, the methodology section lacks a consciously planned outline and could have benefited from more detailed information on the types of sources used.
