The student's work on outlining the topic and research question for their Extended Essay (EE) has received mixed feedback. While the chosen topic and research question are specific, focused, and within the academic scope of Business and Management, the comments highlight the need for a more clearly outlined title and a carefully planned methodology. The student is also advised to ensure that the essay's title promotes an analytical nature and that the methodology section is carefully structured to address the research question. Additionally, the use of secondary resources, high-level academic research and writing skills, and a comprehensive review of literature are acknowledged as strengths in the student's work.
