The student has effectively divided the work into sections, including an introduction, body, and conclusion. The introduction provides a clear explanation of the topic, although the wording of the title could have been improved. The student's approach to the topic and its relation to the math curriculum are well-described in the introduction. However, the conclusion does not effectively summarize the outcomes and respond to the aim stated in the introduction, and the Internal Assessment exceeds the recommended length. Additionally, the citation style and bibliography need improvement. The use of technology, placement of graphs and diagrams, and formatting of mathematical content are all well-executed. However, the student should avoid unnecessary graphs in the future.
