The student's work is well-structured, with clear sections including introduction, body, and conclusion, as well as further subdivisions within the body. The introduction effectively states the topic of the Internal Assessment and provides a clear explanation. However, there is a need for improvement in describing the approach to the topic and the use of technology, as well as in avoiding unnecessary content. The exploration is generally clear and understandable, with logical links between different parts of the work. The student has also adhered to formatting requirements such as page numbering and font size, but double spacing should be applied as well. Finally, it is important to note that the use of unreliable sources such as Wikipedia should be avoided in scientific papers.
