The student does not clearly state the independent and dependent variables in the research question, as the specific temperatures being investigated should be included to enhance focus. Additionally, the method of analysis is not adequately described, requiring clarification on how the equilibrium constant will be determined. While the background theory is well articulated, and the choice of techniques for measuring variables is clearly explained, the student fails to address ethical and environmental issues related to the investigation. Moreover, the methodology lacks sufficient detail, such as the concentration of the ammonia solution, which is necessary for reproducibility.
