The student does not provide any statements about the personal or global significance of the topic, failing to outline why it is relevant and important to investigate. They should have introduced the main topic in a captivating way, outlined its relevance, and described its importance to industries and communities worldwide. Additionally, the student should have included personal input or a story linked to the investigation. On the positive side, the student shows personal input and strong initiative in designing and conducting the study, as evidenced by the inclusion of a picture of their experimental setup and a well-researched work. They also formulated the aim and hypotheses based on prior research, demonstrating their engagement in making the investigation results reliable.
