The student outlined the topic of their study effectively at the beginning of the essay, clearly stating the research question and providing a historical overview of Nokia's significance in the telecommunications industry. The topic is specific and focused, allowing for a thorough exploration of Nokia's decline due to a lack of innovation linked to poor market research. The research question is well-articulated and relevant to Business and Management, requiring the integration of various analytical tools and theories. However, the student did not provide a title that promotes analytical work, nor did they sufficiently include quantitative data to support their analysis. Additionally, the methodology lacks a clear outline, as personal reflections were included instead of a structured approach.